How to Write a Compelling Synopsis

By jt4novels

Most literary agents and publishers require an author to submit a 3-5 page synopsis. Some want a longer synopsis, while others want a one-pager or a detailed chapter-by-chapter outline. My advice is to create a 3-page synopsis since that will suffice most requests and customize it as needed, but always keep the original 3-pager as a template. Format The format should be much like the manuscript itself, double-spaced, one-inch margins, a header with page numbers, and a font in Times Roman Numeral or Courrier. The entire synopsis must be written in present tense and it is best to use third person POV even if your story is written in first person. As writers, it is drilled into our psychological mental space to write in a way where we show, don’t tell. The synopsis is where you throw that concept out the mental window and write everything in a telling format. There is no other way to condense hundreds of pages down to a few pages without this skill. Stick to the main highlights of the story and the critical turning points. Introduction The first lines should contain a hook, introducing who the hero is and what he wants, and who the heroine is and what she wants. Then the next few lines should explain why they can’t have what they want, making the external conflict immediately clear. You don’t need to include a lot of backstory, only enough to get the main concept across to an agent or editor. Setting Give a brief overview of the setting, which would include time period, location, and culture. You don’t need to get into specific details, but flavor the synopsis with enough sensory to make the editor imagine the story and feel the setting. This is not a time to showcase your character dialogue skills, or deep POV sensory descriptions. Characters Concentrate on the two main characters’ personalities and reveal their inner conflict. I usually alternate paragraphs that indicate each character’s point of view. Try to only mention the hero and heroine, however, if you must mention a third or fourth character whose influence is essential to understanding the story, try to only mention them by their profession (doctor, lawyer), or relationship (mother, sister, brother). Introducing too many characters in so few pages can be overwhelming and increases the chance of confusion, a perfect reason to reject your proposal without requesting the full manuscript. Genre Show the development of the plot regarding the genre you’re writing, whether it be romance, suspense, mystery, fantasy, inspirational, etc. If it’s a romance, this is where you tell about the characters’ physical attraction, how they fight the attraction for whatever reason, and how they eventually break down to acknowledge the attraction. Then discuss the progression of the relationship to the caring phase and the love phase. Faith In an Inspirational romance or Christian fiction, make sure you indicate what kind of spiritual state both characters are in at the beginning of the story. Are they believers? If they are, what are their spiritual flaws? What are their weaknesses? Talk about new realizations and discoveries that begin to change their mind. End on how they’ve changed as a result. Either the characters must find salvation, or if they were already believers, then they must have grown in a spiritual area. Think about the different fruits of the Spirit for areas to improve your characters. Climax Just like in your story, build the synopsis to the climatic point. Bring the inner and external conflict to a head, relate the spiritual tension, and make the situation look impossible to resolve. Resolution Tell how the characters resolve their conflict and what plot changes occurred to enable them to achieve their goals or remove the problem. Be sure to include how the story ends. Editors and agents won’t appreciate being teased. They want to know that you can bring the book to a satisfying end before they’ll be willing to invest more time in reading it, or before they will consider advocating it to their team in consideration of buying it. Share with your connections:

Burgwin-Wright House Setting in For Love or Country

By jt4novels

In 2014, my novel For Love or Loyalty was published, but it wasn’t until 2023 when I finally got a chance to visit the Burgwin-Wright House after I had researched it online and used it in my novel. This house is intriguing because it was constructed in 1770 on top of the old city jail dating back to 1744. Currently, it is the only colonial era built home that is open to the public in Wilmington, NC. This home was a perfect setting in my novel to blend in with my story which took place in 1781 during the Revolutionary War when the city was being occupied by the British Army, as well as occupying this house. At the time of my story, it was known as the Burgwin House, as it was not sold to the Wright family until 1799, even though they rented the home much earlier. For this reason, I referred to it in my novel as the Burgwin House. The British officer who took possession of the house was Major James H. Craig a real person who became a significant character in my novel and a formidable opponent to my heroine, Tyra MacGregor, a colonial spy. The major was the direct report for my hero, Captain Hugh Morgan, a British captain who ended up putting Tyra under house arrest and assigned to live at her family home to keep an eye on them. In my story, Tyra was invited to dine here at the Burgwin House the act of saving Captain Morgan from the Tuscorara Indians. Below are photos I took of the rooms she would have seen inside the home. Unlike most homes, the dining room is on the second floor to the right of the stairs and where large groups of entertaining would have happened, including balls and dancing. During my tour of the house, I learned that this was due to the lack of sanitation in those days. Being higher up helped to avoid the smell out on the street where chamber pots would have been dumped and possible horse droppings as well. The parlor is on the right and the study is on the left on the first floor from the front foyer area. The parlor is where they would have entertained a small number of guests from callers, to take tea and play card games. In my novel, Tyra is instructed to wait in the parlor while, Hugh goes into the study to report to his superior Major Craig. Also in the parlor is a pianoforte where ladies would provide musical entertainment. There is also a tall grandfather clock in this room with tall wood stands for candelabras for light in the evenings and at night. Below are more images of the first floor where my characters would have been. While my characters had no need to visit the family room or the bed chambers, I’ve included images of these rooms as well. These rooms are on the left side of the house where there is less sunlight, intended for more internal family use and less entertainment. The exception would have been overnight guests. Outside the home on the property are the gardens, the well, the kitchen house as well as the jail cells under the house dating back to before the house was built. These cells are exposed above ground and look out over the gardens today for the lesser criminals who would eventually be able to return home. In history, the jail cells faced the hanging posts as a deterrent to the lesser criminals not to progress into worse offenses once released. The worst criminals were kept under the house in a dungeon with no sunlight exposure until they were sentenced to hang by a judge. Many would often be left here for as long as a month before the judge arrived to provide their sentence. During this time, they were exposed to floods, cold drafts, and given just enough food and water to keep them alive for a public hanging. In my novel, For Love or Country, I wrote about a true life person as a character in my book, Cornelius Harnett. He was a politician and an American Revolutionary War hero who was betrayed to the British. They captured and bound him and paraded him on the back of a horse like a sack of potatoes in front of the public. They locked him in a block house that was exposed to the cold elements. He grew ill and eventually was released, but didn’t live long and passed away in April 1781. In my novel, my heroine sees this incident happening to him and becomes even more determined to do what she can to further the cause in favor of independence from the crown. While Major Craig spent most of his time occupying the house, after the Battle of Guilford Courthouse (my hometown in Greensboro, NC), General Lord Cornwallis brought his troops to Wilmington to rest and recuperate. He took over the house for three weeks and the major had to temporarily move out. Afterwards, it became known as The Cornwallis House. This incident is also covered in my novel. General Cornwallis hosted a significant dinner party while here. Share with your connections:

Writing in the Regency Era – Online Resources

By jt4novels

I confess, I’ve written a Regency historical novel. And upon my word, I am quite determined to master this era! The Rules There are many strict societal rules that one’s character must know, maintain and behave accordingly. If one’s character behaves inappropriately for the era, that character must have a well-established motivation. The Regency fashion, dialogue, and customs govern the structure of a Regency novel. Therefore, much research and knowledge must go into writing one. What is the Regency Era? The specific Regency period is considered to be a short time frame between 1811 – 1820, in the United Kingdom when King George III was deemed unfit to rule and his son was instated to be his proxy as Prince Regent. However, many consider the era to be much larger between 1795 – 1837, especially if one considers the Regency Era a transitional period between the Georgian and Victorian eras. Online Regency Resources I wanted to share a few online resources that I have found very helpful in writing my Regency. I’ve included the title of the website or webpage, the link, and a brief description. Please note: I cannot vouch for the accuracy of every detail on these websites. Please make sure you find at least three resources to back up a reference and use your own judgment. Candice Hern’s Regency World – https://candicehern.com/regency-world – A great resource of Regency information from a author who writes many Regency based novels. Christian Regency – http://www.christianregency.com – Several links to Regency information on various topics and owned by Author Vanessa Riley. Jane Austen Today – http://janitesonthejames.blogspot.com/ – A blog that explores Regency period author, Jane Austen, as we see her today in movies, prints, sequels, websites and other modern media. It delves into other historical periods as well. Jane Austen’s World – http://janeaustensworld.wordpress.com/ – A blog that strives to bring to life Jane Austen’s novels and the Regency Period through food, dress, social customs, and other 19th century historical details. The Beau Monde – http://www.thebeaumonde.com/ – A writing group for writers who write Regencies. One must be a member of Romance Writers of America, since this is an RWA chapter. Fashions in Time – http://www.fashionsintime.com/html/regency.html – Lady’s costume fashions in the Regency era. You can order your own costume fashions to be made for your measurements and size. Nancy Mayer, Regency Researcher – http://www.regencyresearcher.com – Links and resources from a Regency author who has been researching the period for a number of years. Old Book Art – http://www.oldbookart.com – Historical images that are now out of copyright and in the public domain. Prints Old & Rare – Fox Hunting – http://www.printsoldandrare.com/foxhunting – Historical prints and images of fox hunting scenes. Susanne Dietze’s Regency Research Links – https://www.susannedietze.com/regency-research-links.html – Includes categories of peerage, time and place, amusements, fashion, church, marriage, mourning, Parliament and politics, children and education, home and garden, currency and commerce. Regency Lingo – https://regrom.com/regency-lingo – Common used phrases and terms used in the Regency era on the Regency Reader blog. Regency Yuletide – https://regencyyuletide.blogspot.com – The Definitive Guide to Christmas in Regency England with quotes, recipes, and games to reveal what Christmas was like during the time of Jane Austen. Remember the “holy” in holiday, and let poets and songwriters from the past enliven your experience today.   Share this article or images with your connections: